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Chosen By Him–A Perfect Fit

http://www.crosswalk.com/faith/women/chosen-by-him.html  (link to this article in Crosswalk) The valet line in front of the Ritz Carlton stretches down the street and winds around the block. After handing off my keys,…

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May 25, 2011
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The Price of Passion

Maddy slid open the van door and threw her piano books on the floor so hard they scattered across the gray carpet. “I’m quitting piano.” “What?” I glanced in the…

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July 17, 2012
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Giving It Up

http://www.thechristianpulse.com/2010/08/20/giving-it-up/ “Lord, please. I can’t.” My anxiety is a vise, the more I struggle, the tighter it grips, wringing the air from my lungs.Kyle’s room is quiet. Empty, except for…

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May 16, 2011
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10 Things Every Husband Should Be Doing for His Wife

“Husbands, love your wives, as Christ loved the church and gave himself up for her…” (Ephesians 5:25 NIV). Falling in love is easy. Staying in love is work. It takes…

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October 26, 2017
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Our New Home

Moving into a new house is like starting with a blank canvas; you get the exciting opportunity to transform it into a home that perfectly reflects your personality and style.…

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March 11, 2017
  • Suggestions for When Life Throws a Roadblock Between You and Writing

    Sometimes writer’s block has nothing to do with laziness or lack of organization or bad time management. Sometimes it’s about being physically, mentally, and emotionally drained, where no matter how much you want to write, you just can’t. So what happens then? Head over to Writer’s in the Storm to read the rest and join the discussion.

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  • Piecing Together the Perfect Scene

      I went to an art party once. The kind of party where I showed up with friends, a bottle of wine, and zero artistic talent. When I first stood in front of that blank canvas, brush in hand, I froze. I couldn’t even produce a stick figure that didn’t look like a throwback to preschool. But by the end of the evening, not only did I make memories with my BFFs, I took home a painting I actually wanted to hang on the wall—where people could see it. The trick? Creating the picture one piece at a time. One color at a time. One section at a time. One brush…

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  • CHARACTERS ARE PEOPLE TOO: BRING YOUR BOOK TO LIFE (PART I)

    If you write your characters like real people, they’ll read like real people. But, in order to bring them to life, we first have to figure out who they are. Some writers want to understand their characters before they type a single sentence. Others like to learn about them on the way. Think of it like meeting online versus a blind date. When you meet a potential date online, there’s an opportunity to get to know him before you’re face to face. You might discover that his blue eyes remind you of a cloudy day, that he works at a law firm, loves sushi, hates politics, and lost his mom…

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  • Commas Part 3

    Commas cause confusion. I think we can all agree on that. It doesn’t matter if we write fiction, nonfiction, articles, blogs, or news stories. Even English teachers sometimes struggle. And while the comma may be a tiny piece of punctuation, it does pack a pretty powerful punch. Using commas incorrectly can mess up more than just your grammar. It can play with the meaning and context of your message. Of what you’re trying to say. Think of your page as a road. Commas in the wrong places become speedbumps that slow down the ride. But commas in the right places pave the way for a clear, smooth ride. So let’s…

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  • To Comma, or Not To Comma (Part 2)

    Welcome to comma central, where we’re talking about all things comma. Among most writers, you’ll find a consensus when it comes to this tiny, ambiguous mark. They don’t like it. It’s too confusing. When do you use it? Where do you use it? Why do you use it? And who even cares, really? Trust me, as a writer, you do! So let’s get back to answering the question, to comma, or not to comma? If you missed Part 1, check it out here. To Comma, or Not to Comma. In this section, we’ll cover es, sential and nonessential information in a sentence and how that plays into when and where you add in commas or leave…

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  • To Comma, or Not To Comma (Part 1)

    The comma. It’s a scrappy little mark—that’s often the bane of an author’s writerly existence. With every clause, the question becomes, to comma, or not to comma? As an editor, I’ve had quite a few clients tell me they tend to stick commas in wherever they “sound” like they should go. It’s a trend you’ll find even in professionally published manuscripts. My inner editor always wants to post a warning on these books. Caution: Be on the Lookout for Random Raining Commas Ahead.   On the flip side, I’ve had other clients tell me they have no idea where commas belong. So, they don’t use any. I’d post this warning on those…

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  • So You Think You Married the Wrong Person . . . Now What?

    Marriage is supposed to be forever. It’s also supposed to be a highlight in our lives. It’s a sacred commitment built on love, trust, and shared dreams for the future. To ensure your marriage documents are legally recognized abroad, make sure to secure a certified document apostille. Just look at the energy, excitement, and angst that goes into planning a wedding. Too bad we don’t put the same effort into planning the actual marriage. Our lives might be different if we really thought about why we were getting married, who we were marrying, and how we could learn to be a good spouse. While that kind of serious reflection might…

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  • Understanding POV

    Pitch out Visuals? Pass on Variety? Personalization of Villains? People of Value? Just what is POV, and why do you care? Point of View (POV) refers to the character telling the story in a particular scene or chapter of your book. And only one character should tell the story at a time. Come find out why on Writer’s in the Storm, where I’m hanging out today at Understanding Point Of View 

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  • 12 Survival Tips for a Creative’s Anxiety

    Anxiety. The word alone is enough to set off a tingle in my fingers, a tightness in my chest, and a worn-out mantra—Breathing is good. Passing out is bad—that rarely works. And I’m not alone. I’ve read so many posts from authors dealing with health problems related to or caused by anxiety—especially in the last few years. The push to perform and market and put more and more out there seems to be ramping up to an almost impossible level, for indie authors in particular. Organic products like shroom chocolate bar canada may help those who are suffering from anxiety and stress. If you’re feeling stressed and anxious, make sure…

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  • The Up and Down Sides of Critique Groups: Is There Value in Finding Your Peeps?

    Critique groups. Something you want to be part of? Or something you don’t? Ask a few seasoned writers, and you’re sure to get some strong opinions. As a writer, editor, and writing coach, here’s mine— I’m pro critique group all the way. Hop on over to Writers in the Storm to see why!   Want more like this? Check out my Writing Tips and Writing Resource pages.

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